Write for an Academic Discussion

A professor has posted a question about a topic and students have responded with their thoughts and ideas. Make a contribution to the discussion.
You will have 10 minutes to write.

Your professor is teaching a class on health and wellness.

In your response, you should do the following.

• • Express and support your opinion.
• • Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.

An effective response will contain at least 100 words.

Professor’s question:

We often discuss the connection between our daily habits and our mental well-being. Social media platforms have become a huge part of many people's lives. Some researchers argue these platforms negatively impact self-esteem by promoting unrealistic comparisons. However, others suggest they can create supportive communities and reduce isolation. Which effect do you think is more significant for young adults? Why?

Student response 1:

I think social media mostly harms self-esteem. This is because people usually only post their best moments and edited photos, creating a false reality. For example, constantly seeing these perfect images can make someone feel inadequate about their own life, which is certainly not good for their mental health.

Student response 2:

On the other hand, I believe social media can be very positive. It allows people with specific problems to find each other and form supportive groups. For instance, someone with a rare health condition can connect with others who understand, which helps them feel less alone because they have a community.