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Write for an Academic Discussion Test #020

Write for an Academic Discussion

A professor has posted a question about a topic and students have responded with their thoughts and ideas. Make a contribution to the discussion.
You will have 10 minutes to write.


Your professor is teaching a class on campus life.


In your response, you should do the following.

  • • Express and support your opinion.
  • • Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.

An effective response will contain at least 100 words.


Professor’s question:

A common topic among university students is whether to take on a part-time job during the semester. Some argue that working provides valuable real-world experience and financial independence. However, others claim that a job can be a major distraction, taking time away from studies and potentially leading to lower grades. Do you think the benefits of a part-time job for a full-time student outweigh the potential negative impacts on their academic performance? Why?


Student response 1:

I think having a part-time job is very beneficial for students. It teaches crucial time-management skills and provides financial relief, which reduces stress about tuition and living costs. As a result, students can become more responsible and better prepared for a career after graduation.


Student response 2:

I believe students should focus primarily on their studies. A university education is demanding, and a part-time job consumes time and energy that could be spent on coursework or campus activities. For instance, students with jobs might miss out on networking opportunities or valuable internships.

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