Write for an Academic Discussion Test #042
Write for an Academic Discussion
A professor has posted a question about a topic and students have responded with their thoughts and ideas. Make a contribution to the discussion.
You will have 10 minutes to write.
Your professor is teaching a class on psychology.
In your response, you should do the following.
- • Express and support your opinion.
- • Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.
Professor’s question:
This week, we're examining factors that influence mental well-being in young adults. Social media platforms are a huge part of daily life for many, offering connection and a sense of community. On the other hand, constant comparison with others and exposure to curated, unrealistic lifestyles can lead to anxiety and lower self-esteem. In your opinion, does social media generally have a more positive or negative effect on mental health? Why?
Student response 1:
I think social media has a mostly negative effect. People often compare their real lives to the perfect-looking lives they see online, which can cause feelings of inadequacy. As a result, many users experience increased anxiety and loneliness, even though they seem more connected to others.
Student response 2:
While I see the downsides, I believe social media can be very positive. It allows people with niche interests to find communities and feel less isolated. For instance, someone with a rare hobby can connect with others globally. Therefore, its impact really depends on how you use it.
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